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Hatoful Boyfriend[edit]

Hatoful Boyfriend - MayRey is a video review created by MayRey in mid 2018. It is a review of the worlds best pigeon dating simulator, Hatoful Boyfriend. It is the 9th MayRey review to be made. You can watch this video here. The birds eat poultry yet they are all now intelligent. Where do they legally get poultry from, then? One wonders about their justice system., There is a birdspotting club even though all birds are now intelligent. Is this a case of Big Brother Is Watching? Is it the Covert Pervert club? (It's worth noting that with the exception of a partridge and a quail, all the characters are pigeons.

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I stumbled across this article a couple weeks ago. And I must say that I am impressed about its current condition. Looks to reach GA status with a few tweaks here and there. Hopefully this Peer Review can help step it in the right direction.

Cheers, GamerPro64 21:46, 26 September 2014 (UTC)

*Smash Bros. intro-style* Tezero Zeroes In![edit]

Alright, here I am. Normally I wouldn't consider PR necessary for GAN except for subjects one is new to editing or when one is a new editor, but since you're already here:

• I can't actually tell what Bad Boys' Love is. Is it just a different story route you can select at the beginning of the game? An expansion? Peripheral materials?
  • Mentioned that it was a bonus storyline. Might as to expand on that fact more in the article. GamerPro64 03:17, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
• 'Although Hatoful received much attention for its premise and surreal humor' - why is this apart from the other reception in the lead?
  • Removed it from the lead it wasn't exactly that important. GamerPro64 03:17, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
• The Plot section seems to be on the long side. This is okay if it's just a long game, but be warned that you may be called out for this. The standard length for video game plot sections is about half to two-thirds of this, and you may be held to that standard.
• 'The series is released in visual novel format on the Adobe AIR platform, and takes place in a different universe than the game series.' - source?
• Why is there a table for one volume of the manga?
• 'ahead of Borderlands 2, succeeding 2011's The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim and followed by 2013's BioShock Infinite' - ambiguous as to the ordering
• There's a cite error on the citation 'Dora'.
  • Which citation is that? GamerPro64 03:17, 29 September 2014 (UTC)
    • It's been fixed now; looks to have been caused by list-defined refs. (I really don't see why those are such an improvement if they cause very visible errors when the references are not used in-text.) Tezero (talk) 03:39, 29 September 2014 (UTC)

Tezero (talk) 17:31, 27 September 2014 (UTC)